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  1. Posted: May 21, 2013In: Public

    In a world where a new species of human suffers discrimination and containment, a young and erratic Control Officer for the Registry meets a sadistic yet charming bi-species man and builds a partnership that threatens to expose the lies at the foundation of the organization?s operations.

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    Added an answer on May 22, 2013 at 11:45 pm

    I do have difficulty with vagueness, so I appreciate the headsup. Is this one better: As the government struggles to contain a new mutant species, the Homo nothos (false man), one of its young federal agents works to prove himself by engaging a charming half-human, half-nothos crime boss in a game oRead more

    I do have difficulty with vagueness, so I appreciate the headsup. Is this one better:

    As the government struggles to contain a new mutant species, the Homo nothos (false man), one of its young federal agents works to prove himself by engaging a charming half-human, half-nothos crime boss in a game of lies and seduction. Meanwhile, his nothos partner pursues her freedom.

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  2. Posted: May 21, 2013In: Public

    In a world where a new species of human suffers discrimination and containment, a young and erratic Control Officer for the Registry meets a sadistic yet charming bi-species man and builds a partnership that threatens to expose the lies at the foundation of the organization?s operations.

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    Added an answer on May 22, 2013 at 11:43 pm

    Ah, I see. You asked about the sci-fi elements and the nothos boss, which is why I never mentioned the female characters. Within the logline not all the main characters can be named and for a concept to appeal to women, there doesn't have to be a female character in a lead position, or mentioned inRead more

    Ah, I see. You asked about the sci-fi elements and the nothos boss, which is why I never mentioned the female characters. Within the logline not all the main characters can be named and for a concept to appeal to women, there doesn’t have to be a female character in a lead position, or mentioned in the logline. However, since Eliza, the agent’s partner, is a major character, I’ve tried to find a way to possibly include her within the logline because it would be good to give her that consideration.

    I’m a bit concerned that it doesn’t quite sound right though.

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    As the government struggles to contain a new mutant species, the Homo nothos (false man), one of its young federal agents works to prove himself by playing a charming half-human, half-nothos crime boss in a game of lies and seduction. Meanwhile, his nothos partner pursues her freedom.

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  3. Posted: May 21, 2013In: Public

    In a world where a new species of human suffers discrimination and containment, a young and erratic Control Officer for the Registry meets a sadistic yet charming bi-species man and builds a partnership that threatens to expose the lies at the foundation of the organization?s operations.

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    Added an answer on May 22, 2013 at 12:25 pm

    Do you mean is there a female character as a main? The agent's (Rove's) partner is female, and a nothos, and her storyline is the development of her identity and the gaining of her freedom from Rove and the Registry. She is a driving force in Rove's character development and plot as well. One of RovRead more

    Do you mean is there a female character as a main? The agent’s (Rove’s) partner is female, and a nothos, and her storyline is the development of her identity and the gaining of her freedom from Rove and the Registry. She is a driving force in Rove’s character development and plot as well. One of Rove’s superiors is woman and is a regular “B” story character.

    If you’re asking about the stereotypical “appeal to women,” i.e. romance, then the relationship between the agent and the crime boss fulfills that. The topic of love, of all varieties, is present within just about every storyline to some degree. This story is very much character driven. However, while the women in this show may have small arcs that include romance, their storylines don’t revolve around that because the characters are focused on other matters.

    Otherwise, I’m not really sure what you mean by your question. Could you explain what your concern is regarding the concept and why you feel it wouldn’t appeal to a female audience?

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