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When a wealthy benefactor gets insulted by a homophobic employee, she threatens to close down a community-center unless the culprit agrees to coach her son's team of misfits- a gay soccer team.
NAW Thanks for questions. Yes- gay only teams and leagues exist... Protagonist is the homophobe (who obviously will arc into a good and all accepting guy). Was thinking of having him be an excellent soccer coach/ or excellent coach from another sport and the team's only chance of improving. Its an iRead more
NAW
Thanks for questions.
Yes- gay only teams and leagues exist…
See lessProtagonist is the homophobe (who obviously will arc into a good and all accepting guy). Was thinking of having him be an excellent soccer coach/ or excellent coach from another sport and the team’s only chance of improving. Its an idea in progress..
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When a wealthy benefactor gets insulted by a homophobic employee, she threatens to close down a community-center unless the culprit agrees to coach her son's team of misfits- a gay soccer team.
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The culprit
See lessThe new kid in town is eager to impress the two friends she just made, and tells them wild tales of her four guardians when the latter were hell-raising young women: Stories of murder, bank robberies, and other mayhem.
I think your logline could be improved if you added "stakes" to the storytelling; example "When a new kid in town reels off facinating tales about her guradians, the impressionable audience report her to the authorities." Or something along that theme- add a dimension to the consequences of the storRead more
I think your logline could be improved if you added “stakes” to the storytelling; example
See less“When a new kid in town reels off facinating tales about her guradians, the impressionable audience report her to the authorities.”
Or something along that theme- add a dimension to the consequences of the stories (maybe the stories are real and give clues to some old, unexplained event in the lives of the towns folk). I’ve no idea what your script is about so I’m just shooting ideas off here…