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  1. Posted: June 16, 2015In: Examples

    When the grandmaster of all gangs is killed, The Warriors are labeled as the culprits, now with every gang in the city after them they must battle the streets to clear their name and reach home turf of Coney Island.

    Alexpsmith Penpusher
    Added an answer on June 19, 2015 at 5:49 am

    When a unsuspecting street gang are accused of murdering the head gang leader chaos breaks out now with every gang in the city after them they must fight to clear their name a reach home turf Coney Island. The Protagonist is the Gang 7 guys the Storyworld are the surrounding gangs they operate as aRead more

    When a unsuspecting street gang are accused of murdering the head gang leader chaos breaks out now with every gang in the city after them they must fight to clear their name a reach home turf Coney Island.

    The Protagonist is the Gang 7 guys the Storyworld are the surrounding gangs they operate as a team and slowly members diminish in the battle to reach home. Coney Island.
    Changing the order should explain things better…
    Hav u seen the movie…..????

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  2. Posted: June 18, 2015In: Public

    After a series of volcanic explosions and earthquakes unleashes the 'Shaadowars', a race of monsters born from the depths of the world. The human race who inhabits the world has waged a brutal war for survival. An Australian Knight unsuspectingly teams up with a young Aboriginal boy who has the key to ending the devastating war and drag the world back from darkness.

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    Added an answer on June 19, 2015 at 5:39 am

    Hi.......It all sounds pretty cool.....It just needs tweaking Try When a intrinsic young Aboriginal boy meets a wounded Knight after a savage battle against a new breed of terror the "Shaadowars" they must consult the elders and banish the foreign beasts forever. Change the order around Flaw, FunctiRead more

    Hi…….It all sounds pretty cool…..It just needs tweaking
    Try
    When a intrinsic young Aboriginal boy meets a wounded Knight after a savage battle against a new breed of terror the “Shaadowars” they must consult the elders and banish the foreign beasts forever.

    Change the order around Flaw, Function, Insight,Goal, Shadow Stakes.
    Check mine out if u hav time 🙂 ATB

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  3. Posted: June 16, 2015In: Examples

    When two missing teenage girls bodies are discovered, an unlikely pair of detectives must race to solve the case before more people dissapear.

    Alexpsmith Penpusher
    Added an answer on June 17, 2015 at 7:24 am

    Hi... Which method do you Prefer???? Yes i agree Iam using the Insighting Spec Protag Objective Stakes. But Karel class of 2014 uses Flaw, Function, infighting, Goal,Shadow and Stakes.... Which do you use???

    Hi… Which method do you Prefer????
    Yes i agree Iam using the
    Insighting
    Spec Protag
    Objective
    Stakes.

    But Karel class of 2014 uses
    Flaw, Function, infighting, Goal,Shadow and Stakes….
    Which do you use???

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