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When a gifted teacher and healer discovers a key which unlocks her deeply buried past she lets go of everything she knows and goes on an incredible journey which totally transforms her life.
Whats the hero's flaw ,it is a bit vauge , what are the stakes and then the goal .I think you need facts and details a sense of time is vital to the logline importance ,ask Karelcheck the TBT Ostentatious rapper ? APS. A traumatised teacher is forced to question her murderous past , uncovering a keyRead more
Whats the hero’s flaw ,it is a bit vauge , what are the stakes and then the goal .I think you need facts and details a sense of time is vital to the logline importance ,ask Karelcheck the TBT Ostentatious rapper ?
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A traumatised teacher is forced to question her murderous past , uncovering a key piece of evidence she is.
See lessnow trapped in the crimes conclusion as time ticks away she must unlock her future and rewrite history . .
A ostentatious debt ridden rapper dreams of freedom, fortune and fame , but when his benefactor is murdered , wanted dead or alive he must ride the rap .
Yeah ride the rap means blamed for the kill . Classic Elmore L eonard title - American Grand master of crime fiction writers ....
Yeah ride the rap means blamed for the kill . Classic Elmore L
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Two corrupt ex-cops travel to Coober Pedy with a bag of cash and play chicken with vengeful bikies, thieves, a yakuza wannabe, sociopathic rednecks and a rather short-tempered, one-armed deaf guy.
Lot of characters , no visible flaw , surface tension but no mention of single protags goal or stakes / weakness / strenghts / inner / outer journey ? Good lingo but no story longevity .
Lot of characters , no visible flaw , surface tension but no mention of single protags goal or stakes / weakness / strenghts / inner / outer journey ? Good lingo but no story longevity .
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