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  1. Posted: June 21, 2013In: Public

    As A test subject escapes the clutches of a pharmaceutical giant. Using her powers she must rescue her lover and defeat a patient who's power exceeds her own, her brother.

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    Added an answer on June 24, 2013 at 12:15 pm

    When a frightened pharmacutical lab tester is tricked into mind control, he has 2000 hours to save his sister and brother who are trapped in a time continum before his medication runs out and he is perishes. I think it is a bit floury the powers are what.....what are the stakes all the usual loglineRead more

    When a frightened pharmacutical lab tester is tricked into mind control, he has 2000 hours to save his sister and brother who are trapped in a time continum before his medication runs out and he is perishes.

    I think it is a bit floury the powers are what…..what are the stakes all the usual logline structural highlight
    weakness
    goal
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    why now
    why important
    time restraints

    Karel Segers…………………A

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  2. Posted: September 13, 2012In: Public

    A gangster turned vigilante who's no closer to finding his son's killer after years of searching, gets new information from an unlikely visitor – the son of one of his past victims – but the info comes at a price…

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    Added an answer on September 13, 2012 at 7:44 pm

    A variation ....... A former gangster is reinvigorated , when a unexpected witness reveals a vital clue to his son ' s death , but when the motive is revenge it ' s personal .

    A variation ……. A former gangster is reinvigorated , when a unexpected witness reveals a vital clue to his son ‘ s death , but when the motive is revenge it ‘ s personal .

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  3. Posted: September 9, 2012

    As a cursed detective struggles to contain the wolf within, he suspects he is being framed for murder. With the true killer desperate to expose the existence of werewolves, the detective must accept the beast within… or be lost to the wolf forever.

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    Added an answer on September 9, 2012 at 11:21 am

    Hmm sounds like a classic double trouble shapeshifting protag is antag werewolf saga . Got the Synopsis . Cool subject .

    Hmm sounds like a classic double trouble shapeshifting protag is antag werewolf saga . Got the Synopsis . Cool subject .

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