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After the earth is attacked by Aliens, Gabriel must lead a small group of commando angels into their deadly spacecraft and destroy it before the human race is obliterated.
Oops! In the first line of the third paragraph, I meant to write "the angels" not "they angels."
Oops! In the first line of the third paragraph, I meant to write “the angels” not “they angels.”
See lessAfter the earth is attacked by Aliens, Gabriel must lead a small group of commando angels into their deadly spacecraft and destroy it before the human race is obliterated.
Dear Richiev, Clear inciting incident, goal, hero, and antagonist. I wasn't clear if the word :"their" referred to the angels or the aliens. Also wasn't sure why it was important to give the hero a name unless you were referring to the Archangel Gabriel. After Earth is attacked by aliens, a group ofRead more
Dear Richiev,
Clear inciting incident, goal, hero, and antagonist. I wasn’t clear if the word :”their” referred to the angels or the aliens. Also wasn’t sure why it was important to give the hero a name unless you were referring to the Archangel Gabriel.
After Earth is attacked by aliens, a group of commando angels led by the Archangel Gabriel must destroy the aliens’ spacecraft to save the human race.
Another question I had, that may have little relevance to the logline, is why they angels are getting involved in a conflict between humans and aliens. If the human race is obliterated, what are the consequences for the angels?
See lessTwo hapless petty thieves get involved with a gang of armed robbers but end up chained and locked in the back of a guarded van. All they know is that they must try and escape before the gang returns, or they may never see daylight again.
Dear JulienWillis, Two men trapped in a van--nice clean situation. I also liked the hook of "hapless petty thieves" getting in way over their heads with the gang of armed robbers. When you say they need to escape or "they may never see daylight again" do you mean they will be killed when the gang reRead more
Dear JulienWillis,
Two men trapped in a van–nice clean situation. I also liked the hook of “hapless petty thieves” getting in way over their heads with the gang of armed robbers. When you say they need to escape or “they may never see daylight again” do you mean they will be killed when the gang returns? If the gang members are already planning to kill them, why wouldn’t they do that before they leave?
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