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  1. Posted: September 4, 2013In: Public

    A detective turns to alcohol while battling to keep joint custody of his child however when an elusive serial killer comes on the scene leaving only a family photo as a clue, The detective will soon realise both situations ask the same question what is truly best for the child?

    almiiitey Penpusher
    Added an answer on September 8, 2013 at 1:06 am

    Oops, please change that second sentence to "Hope comments from logline it members HAVE been helpful."

    Oops, please change that second sentence to “Hope comments from logline it members HAVE been helpful.”

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  2. Posted: September 4, 2013In: Public

    A detective turns to alcohol while battling to keep joint custody of his child however when an elusive serial killer comes on the scene leaving only a family photo as a clue, The detective will soon realise both situations ask the same question what is truly best for the child?

    almiiitey Penpusher
    Added an answer on September 8, 2013 at 1:04 am

    Congratulations on writing your first screenplay dutchlegend 1486. Hope comments from logline it members has been helpful. Any other questions for us?

    Congratulations on writing your first screenplay dutchlegend 1486. Hope comments from logline it members has been helpful. Any other questions for us?

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  3. Posted: September 4, 2013In: Public

    A detective turns to alcohol while battling to keep joint custody of his child however when an elusive serial killer comes on the scene leaving only a family photo as a clue, The detective will soon realise both situations ask the same question what is truly best for the child?

    almiiitey Penpusher
    Added an answer on September 4, 2013 at 8:35 pm

    The irony of the detective and the serial killer having a common issue was a good hook for me for your logline. I have a few questions. The serial killer leaves behind a family photo as a clue--do you mean a photo of his family? I assume so but want to be sure--if so that would be a very big clue. HRead more

    The irony of the detective and the serial killer having a common issue was a good hook for me for your logline. I have a few questions. The serial killer leaves behind a family photo as a clue–do you mean a photo of his family? I assume so but want to be sure–if so that would be a very big clue. Has the detective been hired to track the serial killer? Your logline notes the serial killer “comes on the scene”–I’m not sure I know what that means.

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