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A priest kidnaps an atheist writer and tortures him until he believes in God or one of them dies in the process.
As per the theory the main character is the one that changes the most during the story, it depends on the theme and the point of view you want to include in the script but it may seem that the ex-lover is the one that will learn the most and may be also change the most during the story. With the infRead more
As per the theory the main character is the one that changes the most during the story, it depends on the theme and the point of view you want to include in the script but it may seem that the ex-lover is the one that will learn the most and may be also change the most during the story.
With the info we have in the logline is not clear which learning will be done by the writter.
Keep working on it! in my feeling the story has something good, there’s a gem in the world you are building.
See lessAfter his workaholic mom is send to work at their native island, Alex (11) will live his first summer at the gransparents village.
You are rigth is very confusing as I have misplace the pronums, english is not my native tongue and I don't fell confident using google translate to post in the page. The correct logline wil be : After his workaholic mom is send to work at their native island, Alex (11) will live his first summer atRead more
You are rigth is very confusing as I have misplace the pronums, english is not my native tongue and I don’t fell confident using google translate to post in the page. The correct logline wil be :
After his workaholic mom is send to work at their native island, Alex (11) will live his first summer at the gransparents village.
Instead of Alex (11) it could be : her son, that is what I have written in my notes but I change it meanwhile I was writting it. Sorry for the misunderstanding 🙂
See lessIn the near future, a young genius escapes a moonbase where a madman secretly enslaves scientists in his plan to wipe out life on Earth but when no one believes him, he alone must find a way to destroy the base and free the other scientists.
The obective to save the humankind is quite challenging, may be too much for a young "nerd" which has been slaved recently. To me it will be easier to connect with the character if he wants to return to save his love or his family. In the meanwhile for sure he will destroy the base and free the otheRead more
The obective to save the humankind is quite challenging, may be too much for a young “nerd” which has been slaved recently. To me it will be easier to connect with the character if he wants to return to save his love or his family. In the meanwhile for sure he will destroy the base and free the other scientist but for the logline it seems better to me to explain that the trigger that will push him to return is a lover or a relative.
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