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  1. Posted: March 30, 2022In: Romance

    Waiting for the results of a tests, Marc, a boy with cancer, meets Oscar in a hospital. The two young men end up having an exciting relationship, deciding to take a trip around the world. But not everything is what it seems, there is always something left of the cancer on Marc and secrets they try hide, which will soon come to light.

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    Added an answer on April 5, 2022 at 6:32 pm

    Quite long for a logline which should resemble more a cacht phrase and also the sctructure of the logline make it a bit confusing. Which kind of movie it is? you said romance but then you add the trip around the world which will be adventure unless is a honeymoon trip but is not clear. Also, for me,Read more

    Quite long for a logline which should resemble more a cacht phrase and also the sctructure of the logline make it a bit confusing. Which kind of movie it is? you said romance but then you add the trip around the world which will be adventure unless is a honeymoon trip but is not clear.

    Also, for me, the fact that there is allways more cancer left in Marc is strange. You pobably now more than me about that as you have done your research for the script but this it something very unsual to me to have this kind of cancer for you character.

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  2. Posted: March 31, 2022In: Drama

    A former trouble maker, and a troubled group of his childhood friends gather for an extravagant treasure hunt and to solve years old issues. The best friend of a girl he bullied, tries her best to stop him.

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    Added an answer on April 5, 2022 at 6:25 pm

    Small question from my side, if at the beggining of the movie he is allready a former trouble maker what is the character learning in the movie? It will be better to point out the characteristic of the protagonist that will evolve during the story that the one that won't change.

    Small question from my side, if at the beggining of the movie he is allready a former trouble maker what is the character learning in the movie? It will be better to point out the characteristic of the protagonist that will evolve during the story that the one that won’t change.

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  3. Posted: April 1, 2022In: Thriller

    A priest kidnaps an atheist writer and tortures him until he believes in God or one of them dies in the process.

    Andres_ Penpusher
    Added an answer on April 5, 2022 at 6:20 pm

    After reading the other side of the story, the search by the writter relatives to me the moive is there and not in the priest vs writter confict. Something like: A detective must contact his ex-lover relatives to find him after he dissapears in strange circustances. Much more cinematic, 3 act sctrutRead more

    After reading the other side of the story, the search by the writter relatives to me the moive is there and not in the priest vs writter confict. Something like: A detective must contact his ex-lover relatives to find him after he dissapears in strange circustances. Much more cinematic, 3 act sctruture easy to build and big plot twist in the climax when the priest appers and we know why he is being missing, but way more standard movie I know.

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