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Twenty years after the horrific slaying of a family, terrified townsfolk wait in fear for the imminent return of the menacing monster that was put away for the crime.
Another rewrite: 'A brave clan leader of a quaint town must face off with his nemesis, a brooding convicted killer out to settle an old score, in a fight til death.'
Another rewrite:
‘A brave clan leader of a quaint town must face off with his nemesis, a brooding convicted killer out to settle an old score, in a fight til death.’
See lessA cunning serial predator lures a stranded schoolgirl back to his den, where he tries to make her a pawn in his sadistic game, or, can she outplay him?
Yes I like this, thanks DPG. Please can others share their views on this. Thanks also to all who have commented.
Yes I like this, thanks DPG. Please can others share their views on this.
Thanks also to all who have commented.
See lessA cunning serial predator lures a stranded schoolgirl back to his den, where he tries to make her a pawn in his sadistic game, or, can she outplay him?
Here's more rewrites: ?A stranded schoolgirl is lured back to the house of a cunning serial predator, where over a chess match she realises her opponent is making sadistic moves to endanger her life, however her survival instincts makes for a worthy opponent that puts him out of play for good.? Or vRead more
Here’s more rewrites:
?A stranded schoolgirl is lured back to the house of a cunning serial predator, where over a chess match she realises her opponent is making sadistic moves to endanger her life, however her survival instincts makes for a worthy opponent that puts him out of play for good.?
Or variant on ending
?A stranded schoolgirl is lured back to the house of a cunning serial predator, where over a chess match she realises her opponent is making sadistic moves to endanger her life, however her survival instincts makes for a worthy opponent that puts an end to his sick games.?
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