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  1. Posted: September 3, 2012In: Public

    A lifeguard struggles to cope with his wife?s suicide, his ethics are tested when he discovers her rapist drowning at the local beach

    Andrew Bates Logliner
    Added an answer on September 6, 2012 at 10:58 am

    Good point, will revise. Maybe better for a short...

    Good point, will revise. Maybe better for a short…

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  2. Posted: September 5, 2012In: Public

    A nurse helps two vampires rob a mobile blood bank.

    Andrew Bates Logliner
    Added an answer on September 5, 2012 at 3:16 pm

    Who's the antagonist? How is the nurse and the vampires related? What is the nurse's flaw? Where is the i.i? (If there is one)

    Who’s the antagonist? How is the nurse and the vampires related? What is the nurse’s flaw? Where is the i.i? (If there is one)

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  3. Posted: September 3, 2012In: Public

    A lifeguard struggles to cope with his wife?s suicide, his ethics are tested when he discovers her rapist drowning at the local beach

    Andrew Bates Logliner
    Added an answer on September 5, 2012 at 2:55 pm

    Cheers Nicholas The start of the story is of the the man drowning, we see him struggling, then we see someone on a surfboard meters away watching, his face blank. Then we go back 4 wks to the man on the surfboard, we see he is a lifeguard, teaching kids to swim. since the first scene is of him not hRead more

    Cheers Nicholas

    The start of the story is of the the man drowning, we see him struggling, then we see someone on a surfboard meters away watching, his face blank. Then we go back 4 wks to the man on the surfboard, we see he is a lifeguard, teaching kids to swim.
    since the first scene is of him not helping the drowning man, I need to show him doing something nice to get the audience to like him and question…what happened to him?
    We meet his wife, happily married, trying for kids etc. There life as they know it,
    She gets attacked and it all goes down hill from there, who did it, etc…it leads to the scene at the beach.

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