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A violent gangster turns vigilante when his young son is murdered, but when he executes an undercover cop, his operation backfires.
Hey Filmstar My spin... "When a gangster turns vigilante to avenge his murdered son, by executing an undercover cop brings a new member with ulterior motives. Something like that, but better.
Hey Filmstar
My spin…
“When a gangster turns vigilante to avenge his murdered son, by executing an undercover cop brings a new member with ulterior motives.
Something like that, but better.
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Good points, nicholasandrewhalls
Good points, nicholasandrewhalls
See lessA violent gangster turns vigilante when his young son is murdered, but when he executes an undercover cop, his operation backfires.
The structure is great and the story is easy to see. As phoenix pointed out the ending doesn't go with the start of the logline. "his operation backfires" not sure a gangsters action/retaliation would be classed as an operation. Play with the ending a bit more and I think you'll have your logline.
The structure is great and the story is easy to see. As phoenix pointed out the ending doesn’t go with the start of the logline.
“his operation backfires” not sure a gangsters action/retaliation would be classed as an operation.
Play with the ending a bit more and I think you’ll have your logline.
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