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When an aquaphobic janitor discovers he has the ability to control water, he must overcome his fear to save his fiance from a fire manipulating madman
Hey guys what do you think of this one... "When an timid janitor discovers he has the power to command water, he must find a mythical artifact to save his fiance from a fire manipulating madman" to vague?
Hey guys
what do you think of this one…
“When an timid janitor discovers he has the power to command water, he must find a mythical artifact to save his fiance from a fire manipulating madman”
to vague?
See lessStruggling to relate to others, a pet psychiatrist spins out of control thanks to his estranged wife, a high school crush, and an obsessed cat owner.
Typo on the above post. The goal should be "save marriage" not Outer conflict, my bad.
Typo on the above post. The goal should be “save marriage” not Outer conflict, my bad.
See lessStruggling to relate to others, a pet psychiatrist spins out of control thanks to his estranged wife, a high school crush, and an obsessed cat owner.
Hey Jim I like the premise, but the new logline doesn't sell to me. he risks his career, love and sanity...doing what exactly? to save his marriage? to get the high school crush? to remove the obsessed cat owner? What is his goal? He has poor interpersonal skills, but it's his wife that is being estRead more
Hey Jim
I like the premise, but the new logline doesn’t sell to me.
he risks his career, love and sanity…doing what exactly? to save his marriage? to get the high school crush? to remove the obsessed cat owner? What is his goal?
He has poor interpersonal skills, but it’s his wife that is being estranged? One can’t talk or relate, the other refuses to talk, alienation? Not sure if that would work…
My spin…
“When a timid pet psychiatrist tries to repair his marriage, his love life, career and sanity are in shambles when visited by an high school crush and an obsessed cat owner.”
something like that but better.
Fill out the points and it might help your logline become more clear.
Protag- Pet psychiatrist
Antag- obsessed cat owner?
Goal- ?
Inner Conflict- feelings for high school crush?
Outer Conflict- save marriage?
Hook- ?
Genre- ?
Hope I’ve explained everything clearly and without confusion
Best of luck.
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