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  1. Posted: September 5, 2012In: Public

    A violent gangster-vigilante is forced to judge his own actions and be sentenced by his own laws.

    Andrew Bates Logliner
    Added an answer on September 5, 2012 at 2:39 pm

    It feels you have back tracked from the original logline. " After his son's murder, a violent vigilante decides step down and reconnect with his family, he hands control to a new member with ulterior motives.

    It feels you have back tracked from the original logline.

    ” After his son’s murder, a violent vigilante decides step down and reconnect with his family, he hands control to a new member with ulterior motives.

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  2. Posted: September 5, 2012In: Public

    A violent gangster turns vigilante when his young son is murdered, but when he executes an undercover cop, his operation backfires.

    Andrew Bates Logliner
    Added an answer on September 5, 2012 at 2:04 pm

    When a leader of a vigilante gang executes an undercover cop, he seeks a protege to take over the ?family business?, the young man he?s grooming for command has an ulterior motives" maybe....maybe not

    When a leader of a vigilante gang executes an undercover cop, he seeks a protege to take over the ?family business?, the young man he?s grooming for command has an ulterior motives”

    maybe….maybe not

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  3. Posted: September 5, 2012In: Public

    A violent gangster turns vigilante when his young son is murdered, but when he executes an undercover cop, his operation backfires.

    Andrew Bates Logliner
    Added an answer on September 5, 2012 at 2:00 pm

    personally the whole groom and grooming doesn't sit right with me, propably because that term is used for paedophiles etc. The leader of an underworld vigilante gang seeks a protege to take over the ?family business?, but the young man he?s grooming for command has an ulterior motives... The start "Read more

    personally the whole groom and grooming doesn’t sit right with me, propably because that term is used for paedophiles etc.

    The leader of an underworld vigilante gang seeks a protege to take over the ?family business?, but the young man he?s grooming for command has an ulterior motives…

    The start “the leader” Doesn’t sound right, surely there is more than one leader…

    “When a leader of a vigilante gang seeks a protege to take over the ?family business?, the young man he?s grooming for command has an ulterior motives”

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