1. Posted: June 28, 2013

    "After his wife commits suicide, a renowned lifeguard learns that a close family member is the rapist. He must learn to forgive or drown in sea of anger and hate"

    Andrew Bates Logliner

    That's a good point of view... The family member is his brother, they're inseparable. Obviously until he learns that his brother raped his wife. Would it work differently if the logline ended in a question.. (not sure if that is a good idea to end a logline with a question) "After his wife commits sRead more

    That’s a good point of view… The family member is his brother, they’re inseparable. Obviously until he learns that his brother raped his wife.

    Would it work differently if the logline ended in a question.. (not sure if that is a good idea to end a logline with a question)

    “After his wife commits suicide, a renowned lifeguard learns that a close family member is the rapist. Will he forgive his brother or drown in sea of anger and hate?

    what you think?

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  2. Posted: June 28, 2013In:

    When a obscene female human guinea pig volunteers to test a new pharmacutical, she discovers the company is killing the subjects, now sympathetic she has 1000 hours before the drug kills them all.

    Andrew Bates Logliner

    Okay, to save further confusion I suggest we keep any feedback to the original thread and not re post as a new logline with a new title. cheers.

    Okay, to save further confusion I suggest we keep any feedback to the original thread and not re post as a new logline with a new title. cheers.

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  3. Posted: June 28, 2013In:

    When a obscene female human guinea pig volunteers to test a new pharmacutical, she discovers the company is killing the subjects, now sympathetic she has 1000 hours before the drug kills them all.

    Andrew Bates Logliner

    Alex, is this is regarding to my "rayne" logline? Or am i correct to assume that by changing the title and a few words that this is your own logline?

    Alex, is this is regarding to my “rayne” logline? Or am i correct to assume that by changing the title and a few words that this is your own logline?

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