1. Posted: August 7, 2022In:

    A reckless guy with a secret smartphone app must go back in time and undo his courtship with his cousin when he accidentally impregnates her.

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    Hi NavCR, Of course, they certainly are. I suggest you read the loglines of movies in different genres. I did it myself and trust me, it helps. Good Luck Ben

    Hi NavCR,
    Of course, they certainly are. I suggest you read the loglines of movies in different genres. I did it myself and trust me, it helps.

    Good Luck

    Ben

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  2. Posted: July 22, 2022In:

    VOYAGE: After exhausting every medical and experimental procedure known to man to save his child’s life, a billionaire commits his entire fortune to perfect time travel to retrieve the one thing he believes will cure his son’s terminal illness — the blood of Christ.

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    Hi Rich, I wish you good luck and success. Ben

    Hi Rich,
    I wish you good luck and success.

    Ben

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  3. Posted: August 7, 2022In:

    A reckless guy with a secret smartphone app must go back in time and undo his courtship with his cousin when he accidentally impregnates her.

    BenGilani Logliner

    Hi NavCR, Reading your proposed logline and the short synopsis you provided, I see something like this: A mischievous lonely guy must use a mysterious app on his cell phone to go back in time and undo the events that resulted in him impregnating his cousin. I hope you this helps

    Hi NavCR,

    Reading your proposed logline and the short synopsis you provided, I see something like this:

    A mischievous lonely guy must use a mysterious app on his cell phone to go back in time and undo the events that resulted in him impregnating his cousin.

    I hope you this helps

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