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After finding out his moms artificial heart is failing, a low level hacker navigates a seedy cyberpunk underworld to do whatever it takes to keep her alive.
Hi biscayneCreative, I think you should relate "a seedy cyberpunk underworld" to "his mom's artificial heart that is failing". I mean what is he looking for in a seedy cyberpunk underworld? What is he hoping to achieve by navigating a seedy cyberpunk underworld? How can he save his mom's life by navRead more
Hi biscayneCreative,
I think you should relate “a seedy cyberpunk underworld” to “his mom’s artificial heart that is failing”. I mean what is he looking for in a seedy cyberpunk underworld? What is he hoping to achieve by navigating a seedy cyberpunk underworld? How can he save his mom’s life by navigating a seedy cyberpunk underworld? Also IF something is stopping him? Any challenges (if any)?
I suggest you re-write and ask again.
See lessIn a run-down Las Vegas wax museum, a washed-up musician enlists the help of Elvis Presley to save Sin City from one of history’s worst villains.
A (despondent), (washed-up), or (ill-fated) musician takes advantage of a sudden spacetime continuum break and enlists Elvis's help to save (the planet), (Planet Earth) or (Sin City) from one of history’s (deadliest), (craziest), or (worst) characters (villains), (bandits), or (criminals).
A (despondent), (washed-up), or (ill-fated) musician takes advantage of a sudden spacetime continuum break and enlists Elvis’s help to save (the planet), (Planet Earth) or (Sin City) from one of history’s (deadliest), (craziest), or (worst) characters (villains), (bandits), or (criminals).
See lessIn a run-down Las Vegas wax museum, a washed-up musician enlists the help of Elvis Presley to save Sin City from one of history’s worst villains.
Hi Miles, I like where you are going with this. However, I think you should use easier words to explain the spacetime continuum. My worry is that not so many people would understand the concept. I see something like this for now: A (despondent), (washed-up), or (ill-fated) musician takes advantage oRead more
Hi Miles,
I like where you are going with this. However, I think you should use easier words to explain the spacetime continuum. My worry is that not so many people would understand the concept.
I see something like this for now:
A (despondent), (washed-up), or (ill-fated) musician takes advantage of a sudden spacetime continuum break and enlists the help of Elvis to save (the planet), (Planet Earth) or (Sin City) from one of history’s (deadliest), (craziest), or (worst) characters (villains), (bandits), or (criminals).
I hope this helps
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