1. Posted: July 29, 2022In:

    A woman decides to record events of her friend’s sexual relationship with her deaf mute younger sister.

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    Hi IvyEight6, Ok, a woman decides to record those sexual events: Why? To achieve what? Why does she have to do that? How is she going to do that? What is stopping her? To me, your logline has to include selling points. I hope this helps.

    Hi IvyEight6,
    Ok, a woman decides to record those sexual events:

    Why?
    To achieve what?
    Why does she have to do that?
    How is she going to do that?
    What is stopping her?

    To me, your logline has to include selling points.

    I hope this helps.

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  2. Posted: July 22, 2022In:

    A occult detective finds herself in a world of supernatural beings in dystopian America.

    BenGilani Logliner

    Hello IvyEight6, How about: Investigating America's post-apocalyptic occult cases, a female detective discovers an inexplicable world of supernatural entities. I hope this helps.

    Hello IvyEight6,
    How about:

    Investigating America’s post-apocalyptic occult cases, a female detective discovers an inexplicable world of supernatural entities.

    I hope this helps.

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  3. Posted: July 22, 2022In:

    THE INCREDIBLY, ALMOST MADE UP TRUE STORY OF THORTON T. THORTON The wealthy owner of a television network creates a show so offensive it results in a global backlash by America and its allies who will do anything to prevent the airing of the network’s lastest sitcom– which takes place in a Nazi concentration camp.

    BenGilani Logliner

    Hi pickerman123, How about: A deep delve into THORTON T's television network and its most offensive tv show. I hope this helps

    Hi pickerman123,
    How about:
    A deep delve into THORTON T’s television network and its most offensive tv show.

    I hope this helps

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