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A occult detective finds herself in a world of supernatural beings in dystopian America.
Hi IvyEight6, I personally like where you are going with this logline. That's why I need to know the answer to the following questions in order to help/review. Do you mean an undercover detective by an occult detective? or do you mean a detective who investigates occult cases? What other word/s canRead more
Hi IvyEight6,
See lessI personally like where you are going with this logline. That’s why I need to know the answer to the following questions in order to help/review.
Do you mean an undercover detective by an occult detective? or do you mean a detective who investigates occult cases?
What other word/s can you use instead of “dystopian”?
How does the detective find herself in the world of supernatural beings?
BATTLEGROUND :During World War Two, in the merciless and freezing wilderness of Siberia, stranded German and American soldiers put their differences aside to exterminate hostile, self-replicating, alien parasites which threaten not only America and Germany — but all mankind.
Hi pickerman 123, How about Stranded in the glacial wilderness of Siberia, WWII rivals, American and German soldiers must join forces and fight off an other-worldly / extraterrestrial / alien / paranormal enemy. You can also ad: that is now a threat to both armies / parties / sides / ..... I hope thRead more
Hi pickerman 123,
How about
Stranded in the glacial wilderness of Siberia, WWII rivals, American and German soldiers must join forces and fight off an other-worldly / extraterrestrial / alien / paranormal enemy.
You can also ad:
that is now a threat to both armies / parties / sides / …..
I hope this helps
See lessVOYAGE: After exhausting every medical and experimental procedure known to man to save his child’s life, a billionaire commits his entire fortune to perfect time travel to retrieve the one thing he believes will cure his son’s terminal illness — the blood of Christ.
Hi, pickerman123, Personally, I think this billionaire will have many better choices in regards to his child if he can achieve time travel rather than obtaining christ's blood. Don't you think? However, if you really want to stick to your concept, I suggest the below template: A business (property,Read more
Hi, pickerman123,
Personally, I think this billionaire will have many better choices in regards to his child if he can achieve time travel rather than obtaining christ’s blood. Don’t you think? However, if you really want to stick to your concept, I suggest the below template:
A business (property, oil, banking, etc.) tycoon dedicates/sacrifices his entire fortune to perfect time travel so he can save his child’s life.
I hope this helps
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