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– With life beyond high school approaching, three best friends find themselves in an unexpected love triangle as the summer winds down.
Hi yoobui2, How about something like this as a template? Preparing for the adult life ahead of them, three high school graduates must deal with an unanticipated love triangle before summer winds up. I hope this helps
Hi yoobui2,
How about something like this as a template?
Preparing for the adult life ahead of them, three high school graduates must deal with an unanticipated love triangle before summer winds up.
I hope this helps
See lessWhen a stranger from his criminal past visits his support group, an ex-sicario priest must protect the people in his new life by reawakening old demons.
Hi The_CNI, May I ask who is your lead character? The priest? The stranger? The ex-sicario priest must protect the people in his new life from who/m? What is the relation of the support group with the ex-sicario priest? I propose you write your logline in simple words (without using any idioms or meRead more
Hi The_CNI,
May I ask who is your lead character? The priest? The stranger?
The ex-sicario priest must protect the people in his new life from who/m?
What is the relation of the support group with the ex-sicario priest?
I propose you write your logline in simple words (without using any idioms or metaphors) first. Then share it here so we can figure out the abstract concept. Then you will probably get more feedback.
I hope this helps
See lessIn an effort to win souls, a street preacher must convince two boys to walk the literal narrow and difficult path to salvation.
Hi Assaf, is this closer to what you are aiming for? In an effort to increase his disciples, an evangelist preacher must convince two boys to walk the literal narrow and difficult path to salvation. Now, how else can you say this? "walk the literal narrow and difficult path to salvation" re-write anRead more
Hi Assaf,
is this closer to what you are aiming for?
In an effort to increase his disciples, an evangelist preacher must convince two boys to walk the literal narrow and difficult path to salvation.
Now, how else can you say this? “walk the literal narrow and difficult path to salvation”
re-write and we will see it then.
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