1. Posted: June 19, 2022In:

    When an abused blind orphaned boy discovers his magical powers, he struggles to stop a megalomeniac businessman with intent to obliterate his kingdom and his people.

    Benneth Logliner

    Thanks for your review. The fact is that the businessman wants to rule the kingdom. He brings a witch who placed a curse on the kingdom. The kingdom is hit by servere drought. The people become dissatisfied with the king. The man almost succeed but the blind boy breaks the curse with his power.

    Thanks for your review. The fact is that the businessman wants to rule the kingdom. He brings a witch who placed a curse on the kingdom. The kingdom is hit by servere drought. The people become dissatisfied with the king. The man almost succeed but the blind boy breaks the curse with his power.

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  2. Posted: June 14, 2017In:

    A rewrite: When a young Muslim emigrant woman finds love with a Norwegian man, her betrothed vows to stop them at all costs.

    Benneth Logliner

    Thanks to all of you i did a rewrite here: When she abandones her arranged marriage with a dream to find a man she love, a young emigrant in Norway must fight for her dream against her betrothed who is determined to stop her.

    Thanks to all of you i did a rewrite here:
    When she abandones her arranged marriage with a dream to find a man she love, a young emigrant in Norway must fight for her dream against her betrothed who is determined to stop her.

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  3. Posted: June 12, 2017In:

    A rewrite: When a young Muslim woman and a none Muslim man falls in love, they fight for their lives, when her betrothed hunts them to revenge his and his family’s honor.

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    Benneth Logliner

    Hei, this happens in present time in Norway. She falls in love with a Norwegian man. Should I have that in the logline? Tks

    Hei, this happens in present time in Norway. She falls in love with a Norwegian man. Should I have that in the logline? Tks

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