1. Posted: April 2, 2016In:

    In a modern European country, a deadly terrorist group carries out an attack, a naive young school dropout must get would-be victims to safety.

    Benneth Logliner

    Thanks guys. By the way Richiev, the protagonist was set up by a terrorist who is his mentor in the faith, not his girlfriend. Actually his girlfriend did not want him to convert. So I am looking at a logline that goes like this: ?When his Muslim Mentor?set?s him up as the fall guy in terrorist attaRead more

    Thanks guys. By the way Richiev, the protagonist was set up by a terrorist who is his mentor in the faith, not his girlfriend. Actually his girlfriend did not want him to convert. So I am looking at a logline that goes like this:

    ?When his Muslim Mentor?set?s him up as the fall guy in terrorist attack, a Norwegian dropout, must stop the plot and save the potential victims which will be killed in his name.?

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    In a modern European country, a deadly terrorist group carries out an attack, a naive young school dropout must get would-be victims to safety.

    Benneth Logliner

    Thanks again for your comments. To give you more details; This is a story where the protagonist falls in love with a Muslim girl and coverts to Islam because of her. He winds up being used as scapegoat by a terrorist in disguise. The terrorist had been his confidant up to the point when?he sets himRead more

    Thanks again for your comments.

    To give you more details;

    This is a story where the protagonist falls in love with a Muslim girl and coverts to Islam because of her. He winds up being used as scapegoat by a terrorist in disguise. The terrorist had been his confidant up to the point when?he sets him up in the train with a bomb.
    The protagonist is just a regular Joe with only his courage as his special talent/skill.
    He becomes a hero by saving the passengers and a four years old boy. He takes the bomb on himself to save them.

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  3. Posted: April 2, 2016In:

    In a modern European country, a deadly terrorist group carries out an attack, a naive young school dropout must get would-be victims to safety.

    Benneth Logliner

    Thanks for your comment. In my script he is not saving any relative. This is a train terror attack. My rewrite. In a modern European country of Norway, a deadly terrorist group carries out an attack, a patriotic naive ?young school dropout must get his countrymen to safety.

    Thanks for your comment.

    In my script he is not saving any relative. This is a train terror attack.

    My rewrite.

    In a modern European country of Norway, a deadly terrorist group carries out an attack, a patriotic naive ?young school dropout must get his countrymen to safety.

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