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When his mentor, a terrorist in disguise set’s him up with a bomb in a train terror attack, a Norwegian dropout, must evacuate the potential victims which will be killed in his name before the bomb kills them all.
This is some adjustments in my plot and logline.: "To please his Muslim girlfriend, a valiant dropout converts to Islam, gets set up by his religious mentor in a train bomb attack, he must evacuate his frantic countrymen before the bomb kills them."
This is some adjustments in my plot and logline.:
“To please his Muslim girlfriend, a valiant dropout converts to Islam, gets set up by his religious mentor in a train bomb attack, he must evacuate his frantic countrymen before the bomb kills them.”
See lessIn a modern European country, a deadly terrorist group carries out an attack, a naive young school dropout must get would-be victims to safety.
What about this? When his mentor set's him up with a bomb in a train terror attack, a naive young man, while being accused of terrorism must evacuate passengers which will be killed in his name
What about this?
When his mentor set’s him up with a bomb in a train terror attack, a naive young man, while being accused of terrorism must evacuate passengers which will be killed in his name
See lessIn a modern European country, a deadly terrorist group carries out an attack, a naive young school dropout must get would-be victims to safety.
Thanks Nir Shelter I have done a rewrite on my logline. Tell me what your guys think. "When his mentor, a terrorist in disguise set's him up in a train terror attack, a Norwegian dropout, must evacuate the potential victims which will be killed in his name, before a bomb goes off."
Thanks Nir Shelter
I have done a rewrite on my logline. Tell me what your guys think.
“When his mentor, a terrorist in disguise set’s him up in a train terror attack, a Norwegian dropout, must evacuate the potential victims which will be killed in his name, before a bomb goes off.”
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