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  1. Posted: May 25, 2016In: Thriller

    When a young man converts to Islam for the love of a girl, he finds his life thrown into chaos when the mentor he befriended ends up being a terrorist, intent on bombing a train -with him omboard.

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    Added an answer on May 26, 2016 at 4:14 am

    The love part is in ACT 1. The conversion is the turning point which happens in ACT 2. The MC meets the Antagonist in ACT 2 but he does not realize that the antagonist is only planing to use him until ACT 3 when he gets abandoned in the train with a bomb by the antagonist.

    The love part is in ACT 1. The conversion is the turning point which happens in ACT 2. The MC meets the Antagonist in ACT 2 but he does not realize that the antagonist is only planing to use him until ACT 3 when he gets abandoned in the train with a bomb by the antagonist.

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  2. Posted: April 14, 2016In: Thriller

    A troubled young man converts to Islam to please his Muslim girlfriend, gets set up by a psychopathic terrorist in a train bomb attack, he must evacuate his frantic landsmen before a ticking time-bomb kills them.

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    Added an answer on April 17, 2016 at 8:17 am

    Thanks again dpg. MC converted because he thought that it is what his girlfriend wanted. His girlfriend has been disowned by her family because of him(none Muslim). MC got into the line of a stray bullet. What I mean is that he converted and came into contact with a terrorist on a mission in his couRead more

    Thanks again dpg.

    MC converted because he thought that it is what his girlfriend wanted. His girlfriend has been disowned by her family because of him(none Muslim). MC got into the line of a stray bullet. What I mean is that he converted and came into contact with a terrorist on a mission in his country of Norway. The terrorist is in disguise and looking for scapegoat.

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  3. Posted: April 14, 2016In: Thriller

    A troubled young man converts to Islam to please his Muslim girlfriend, gets set up by a psychopathic terrorist in a train bomb attack, he must evacuate his frantic landsmen before a ticking time-bomb kills them.

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    Benneth Logliner
    Added an answer on April 16, 2016 at 6:41 am

    Thanks guys. I have done some rewrite and will appreciate a feedback. "When a naive young man converts to Islam for the love of a girl, he becomes a target in a terrorist conspiracy against his country, he has 30 minutes to thwart their plot and save his landsmen."

    Thanks guys.

    I have done some rewrite and will appreciate a feedback.

    “When a naive young man converts to Islam for the love of a girl, he becomes a target in a terrorist conspiracy against his country, he has 30 minutes to thwart their plot and save his landsmen.”

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