1. Posted: April 14, 2016In:

    A troubled young man converts to Islam to please his Muslim girlfriend, gets set up by a psychopathic terrorist in a train bomb attack, he must evacuate his frantic landsmen before a ticking time-bomb kills them.

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    Benneth Logliner

    Thanks dpg, I tried a different approach. "A naive young man converts to Islam for the love of a girl, winds up in the middle of a terror plot against his country."

    Thanks dpg, I tried a different approach.

    “A naive young man converts to Islam for the love of a girl, winds up in the middle of a terror plot against his country.”

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  2. Posted: April 14, 2016In:

    A troubled young man converts to Islam to please his Muslim girlfriend, gets set up by a psychopathic terrorist in a train bomb attack, he must evacuate his frantic landsmen before a ticking time-bomb kills them.

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    Benneth Logliner

    Thanks Craig. Like I stated earlier, this is a love story that gone bad. The train scene is basically in the third act. I am afraid that if I exclude the love story, it might end up as any other set up story. What do you think?

    Thanks Craig. Like I stated earlier, this is a love story that gone bad. The train scene is basically in the third act. I am afraid that if I exclude the love story, it might end up as any other set up story. What do you think?

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  3. Posted: April 14, 2016In:

    A troubled young man converts to Islam to please his Muslim girlfriend, gets set up by a psychopathic terrorist in a train bomb attack, he must evacuate his frantic landsmen before a ticking time-bomb kills them.

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    Benneth Logliner

    A naive young man falls in love and converts to Islam, gets set up in a train bomb attack by a terrorist on a mission against his country, he must stop the attack and evacuate his landsmen.

    A naive young man falls in love and converts to Islam, gets set up in a train bomb attack by a terrorist on a mission against his country, he must stop the attack and evacuate his landsmen.

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