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A moody princess meets two men at the edge of forest and takes advantage of their good nature, but one of the men take something else from her.
I am by no means an expert in this field but first glance at the logline feels like I'm about to watch? porn
I am by no means an expert in this field but first glance at the logline feels like I’m about to watch? porn
See lessA broke bounty hunter with schizophrenia and down to his final pill, must catch an elusive fugitive in extremely isolated territory before his hallucinations kick in.
I know that stakes may not seem high but I'm struggling to fit in to my already packed logline the outcomes of him being unmedicated. There's a dark secret he carries and one he convinces himself was just a hallucination the last time he went for a while unmedicated. He wasn't hallucinating. This isRead more
I know that stakes may not seem high but I’m struggling to fit in to my already packed logline the outcomes of him being unmedicated. There’s a dark secret he carries and one he convinces himself was just a hallucination the last time he went for a while unmedicated. He wasn’t hallucinating. This is unravelled throughout.
See lessAfter being framed for assault, an indigenous basketballer from the Australian outback, must prove himself innocent before his scholarship to play for a college in the USA expires.
Thanks for the feedback all, and again I agree with most of what you're saying. I have put together two alternative versions based on our discussions and your quality feedback. I personally think Option 2 is where I'm heading to begin my writing as I feel Option 1 may have too much unnecessary backRead more
Thanks for the feedback all, and again I agree with most of what you’re saying. I have put together two alternative versions based on our discussions and your quality feedback. I personally think Option 2 is where I’m heading to begin my writing as I feel Option 1 may have too much unnecessary back story. If anyone begs to differ or has an alternative version I’m open to seeing it. My only thoughts on the new versions are that we now don’t know he’s on the run trying to prove his innocence. Is this necessary?
Option 1
After being framed for assault, a talented Australian basketball player recently released from a small town juvenile detention must prove his innocence before a scholarship to a USA college expires. (30)
Option 2
See lessAfter being framed for assault, a talented basketball player from the Australian outback, must prove his innocence before a chance to play for a college scholarship in the USA expires. (30)