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When a young ward of the state is fostered to a crazy family planning a heist, he sets out to find his real father before being forced to engage in criminal activities that will see him back in juvenile prison.
I don't like the word 'young' now that I've re-read it, as 'Wards Of The State' are always assumed to be young. I will however change this to add in his flaw after reviewing some feedback. I assume it's recommended to re-post in the same thread for easier reviewing, correct me if I'm wrong?
I don’t like the word ‘young’ now that I’ve re-read it, as ‘Wards Of The State’ are always assumed to be young. I will however change this to add in his flaw after reviewing some feedback. I assume it’s recommended to re-post in the same thread for easier reviewing, correct me if I’m wrong?
See lessA street stupid teen struggles to sell methamphetamine looted from a crimescene to fund his dream of making it big in Hollywood, as he’s pursued by a psychopath cop.
Thanks Dkpough1. I agree that a time out will be a good idea. I was heading along that line anyway. I had a quick scan of my script this morning and I've come to the conclusion that I've put so much thought into the range of characters that I may just have neglected getting to know my MC. I have a bRead more
Thanks Dkpough1.
See lessI agree that a time out will be a good idea. I was heading along that line anyway. I had a quick scan of my script this morning and I’ve come to the conclusion that I’ve put so much thought into the range of characters that I may just have neglected getting to know my MC. I have a bad habit of working backwards. I agree with all of your comments.
A street stupid teen struggles to sell methamphetamine looted from a crimescene to fund his dream of making it big in Hollywood, as he’s pursued by a psychopath cop.
Thank you Nir Shelter. Yes, definitely some resistance on my behalf and I didn't view any comments made by your good self as pretentious, quite the opposite actually. It's great people are taking time out of their day to provide amateur writers with honest/knowledgeable advice to move their ideas foRead more
Thank you Nir Shelter.
See lessYes, definitely some resistance on my behalf and I didn’t view any comments made by your good self as pretentious, quite the opposite actually. It’s great people are taking time out of their day to provide amateur writers with honest/knowledgeable advice to move their ideas forward.
When you spend so much time developing characters and allowing the interactions to unfold in your script, the advice given by others can be confronting,? especially knowing you have to go back and change things which inevitably send a ripple throughout the entire screenplay.
I will download the book you suggested on my Kindle tomorrow(today I mean) and humbly take the advice on board. It may be the kick in the backside I need.