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An ambitious young street magician must undergo a rite of death and rebirth to defeat the guardian of a magical world hidden within our own.
When his estranged father returns and performs an act of true magic, an ambitious young street magician must undergo a dangerous rite of death and rebirth to defeat the malevolent creature guarding the source of true magic. After the rite, the protagonist gains the ability to perceive the magical woRead more
When his estranged father returns and performs an act of true magic,
an ambitious young street magician must undergo a dangerous rite of death and rebirth
to defeat the malevolent creature guarding the source of true magic.
After the rite, the protagonist gains the ability to perceive the magical world in which the guardian exists.
The guardian is a powerful and destructive force tasked to protect the source of true magic from those unworthy of its truth.
Should the protagonist fail in defeating the guardian he will die.
The world of true magic is actually very simple once you become aware of it.
The story is supposed to be simple too.
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REVISED <after checking the formula> When his estranged father returns and performs an act of true magic, <12> an ambitious young street magician <6> must undergo a rite of death and rebirth <8> to defeat the guardian of a magical world hidden within our own. <12> TOTALRead more
REVISED <after checking the formula>
When his estranged father returns and performs an act of true magic, <12>
an ambitious young street magician <6> must undergo a rite of death and rebirth <8>
to defeat the guardian of a magical world hidden within our own. <12>
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I’m not sure about what to name the protagonists FLAW.
He loved his father. That love changed when his father walked out on his family, walked out on him. He felt that his father didn’t love him, didn’t care about him.
When his father returns, at first, the protagonist wants nothing to do with him.
“One drink” his father says, “Just one drink”
The Catalyst is when the protagonist goes for one drink with his father and witnesses his father perform at act of true magic.
His father explains why he left and why he returned. After the explanation the protagonist is now in awe of his father. He understands why he left. But the void his father left behind is still a void.
His father offers to fill that void with an ancient magic, long forgotten. The son accepts his fathers offer and then we hit ACT 2.
See lessTwo occult detectives must investigate a murder at a prestigious boys boarding school when the body of a missing boy is discovered.
Please help me get started on this. The detectives cannot believe that the cause of death was supernatural. The face of the dead boy however looks like that girl in the closet from The Ring and the cause of death seems to be a heart attack. The school is on lock down until the killer is found. The dRead more
Please help me get started on this.
The detectives cannot believe that the cause of death was supernatural. The face of the dead boy however looks like that girl in the closet from The Ring and the cause of death seems to be a heart attack.
The school is on lock down until the killer is found. The detectives have three days to catch the killer. The detectives begin by questioning the boys friends and discover that he was a notorious bully. This helps them narrow the case down to those who were being bullied. The detectives start questioning the boys.
At midpoint one of the boys starts questioning one of the detectives about his work and beliefs. He likes the detective and starts to open up. He leads the two detectives to an old abandoned church where he says he killed the bully.
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