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  1. Posted: October 24, 2017In: Examples

    When androids of a wild west theme park start gaining conscience, the scientist behind the show must overcome the senior manager’s intention to shut down the current program.

    Billy14 Samurai
    Added an answer on October 29, 2017 at 1:03 am

    DPG I LOVE YOU!!!

    DPG I LOVE YOU!!!

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  2. Posted: September 8, 2017In: Coming of Age

    When a foster care teen learns of his biological father’s death, he must undergo a mystic rite of passage to claim his inheritance. (23)

    Billy14 Samurai
    Added an answer on September 10, 2017 at 11:54 am

    Dpg and Nir, Thanks for your input. It's really great having, not one but, two experienced logliners to bounce ideas around with. Everyone in my life is pretty much completely uninterested in stories. I NEED YOU GUYS SO BAD!!! Without you I'm in darkness. Thank you for being here! Okay, so back to tRead more

    Dpg and Nir,

    Thanks for your input. It’s really great having, not one but, two experienced logliners to bounce ideas around with. Everyone in my life is pretty much completely uninterested in stories. I NEED YOU GUYS SO BAD!!! Without you I’m in darkness. Thank you for being here!

    Okay, so back to this story of mine. What about the following:

    A daydreaming teen learns he must undergo a Rite of Passage on his 16th Birthday to claim his father’s fortune and free himself from reality.

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  3. Posted: September 8, 2017In: Coming of Age

    When a foster care teen learns of his biological father’s death, he must undergo a mystic rite of passage to claim his inheritance. (23)

    Billy14 Samurai
    Added an answer on September 8, 2017 at 6:10 pm

    What's with the "fantasy world" advice? Lol It's not a fantasy. Okay, so my first thought was that he goes through with the Rite because he's after the money. But with the new scenario it would be curiosity. What was it about his father that made his mother hate him? I need to think about it more. BRead more

    What’s with the “fantasy world” advice? Lol It’s not a fantasy.

    Okay, so my first thought was that he goes through with the Rite because he’s after the money.

    But with the new scenario it would be curiosity. What was it about his father that made his mother hate him?

    I need to think about it more.

    But thanks for the pointers and I’ll definitely keep them in mind.

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