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After a near drowning awakens an ability to commune with evil spirits, (12) a cowardly teenager must struggle to resist when a bushfire causes unbearably hot summer nights. (27)
I'm giving up on this story until I can get something normal right. This thing has been a pain in the ass for 10 years now. Moving on to something with more action.
I’m giving up on this story until I can get something normal right. This thing has been a pain in the ass for 10 years now.
Moving on to something with more action.
See lessAfter a near drowning awakens an ability to commune with evil spirits, (12) a cowardly teenager must struggle to resist when a bushfire causes unbearably hot summer nights. (27)
After a near drowning awakens an ability to commune with evil spirits, (12) a cowardly teenager's struggles to resist lead to a confrontation with forces, forgotten but never forsaken. (28)
After a near drowning awakens an ability to commune with evil spirits, (12) a cowardly teenager’s struggles to resist lead to a confrontation with forces, forgotten but never forsaken. (28)
See lessAfter a near drowning awakens an ability to commune with evil spirits, (12) a cowardly teenager must struggle to resist when a bushfire causes unbearably hot summer nights. (27)
MC's flaw = he is a coward but rightly so. MC's Inciting Incident = Near drowning results in ability to commune with evil spirits. MC's main action = struggles to resist his ability. He doesn't want to make contact with evil spirits. MC's goal = to keep evil at bay. To keep his distance from a worldRead more
MC’s flaw = he is a coward but rightly so.
MC’s Inciting Incident = Near drowning results in ability to commune with evil spirits.
MC’s main action = struggles to resist his ability. He doesn’t want to make contact with evil spirits.
MC’s goal = to keep evil at bay. To keep his distance from a world of evil spirits he has no desire whatsoever to be a part of.
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