After a near drowning awakens an ability to commune with evil spirits, (12) a cowardly teenager’s struggles to resist making contact lead to a deeper understanding of his ability. (28)

I have a story. I’m just really struggling to get it to fit into the logline nutshell.

The whole bushfire thing is a big part of the story but I understand what you mean when you say it sounds unrelated. I know the story too well whereas the reader understands only what he reads.

Thanks DK. Ive been bouncing around a lot between different versions of the same story but this is the original idea and if I could choose this would, hands down, be the story I’d most love to tell.

Any further assistance would be most appreciated. I’ve been struggling for a very long time with this story now. Almost 10 years.