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  1. Posted: February 26, 2013In: Public

    Wanting to right his ancestors wrongdoings during the slave-trade era, a youngboy struggles to attain peace as he unwittingly rekindles an age long war.

    blajay
    Added an answer on February 28, 2013 at 12:46 am

    JanCabal Things to note. Maybe this will shed more light into helping me get a great logline.... There is an older world living in parallel with this world as we know it in which there "is" a bitter war The war "froze" in the older world over time but actions of good intent, to make up for injusticeRead more

    JanCabal

    Things to note. Maybe this will shed more light into helping me get a great logline….

    There is an older world living in parallel with this world as we know it in which there “is” a bitter war

    The war “froze” in the older world over time but actions of good intent, to make up for injustices of his ancestors, by youngboy in todays world will, unknown to him, “unfreeze” the older world, causing the war to continue….

    Sole victim of the youngboys ancestor (from the older world) crosses into the world and wants to claim what belongs to her but now in youngboys custody.

    Youngboys health is ailing and he thinks by doing the “right thing” he will be okay

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  2. Posted: February 26, 2013In: Public

    Wanting to right his ancestors wrongdoings during the slave-trade era, a youngboy struggles to attain peace as he unwittingly rekindles an age long war.

    blajay
    Added an answer on February 28, 2013 at 12:29 am

    Andrew....... YES you are correct. (y) Spot on.

    Andrew……. YES you are correct. (y)
    Spot on.

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  3. Posted: February 26, 2013In: Public

    Wanting to right his ancestors wrongdoings during the slave-trade era, a youngboy struggles to attain peace as he unwittingly rekindles an age long war.

    blajay
    Added an answer on February 26, 2013 at 4:10 pm

    Wanting to right his ancestors wrongdoings during the slave-trade era, a youngboy unwittingly rekindles an age long war and struggles to end the war.

    Wanting to right his ancestors wrongdoings during the slave-trade era, a youngboy unwittingly rekindles an age long war and struggles to end the war.

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