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  1. Posted: April 9, 2012

    "Two world-class cage fighters find themselves entangled in a secret, gay love affair with one another. Risking all they?ve battled for, with devastating consequences and a powerful climax."

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    Added an answer on June 1, 2016 at 9:54 am

    I agree with everyone here.? To say there are "devastating consequences" is too vague, and a "powerful climax" is on the verge of pandering.? It sounds like a great premise. I can picture the inner struggle they each have when they discover they're scheduled to beat the s#!? out of each other...espeRead more

    I agree with everyone here.? To say there are “devastating consequences” is too vague, and a “powerful climax” is on the verge of pandering.? It sounds like a great premise. I can picture the inner struggle they each have when they discover they’re scheduled to beat the s#!? out of each other…especially if it’s a title bout. Give us some emotional context to their “risk,” both with their careers and their relationship.

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