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In 1915, after a promising Australian sprinter spurns athletic glory for military glory by enlisting in the Great War, he must survive the carnage of the doomed Gallipoli campaign in Turkey.
This is good. I think the only things I would change are: find a better word than "spurn" (to reject with disdain or contempt). Perhaps "forgoes" or "renounces" remove "for military glory" It would then read as follows: In 1915, after a promising Australian sprinter renounces athletic glory by enlisRead more
This is good. I think the only things I would change are:
It would then read as follows:
In 1915, after a promising Australian sprinter renounces athletic glory by enlisting in the Great War, he must survive the carnage of the doomed Gallipoli campaign in Turkey.
Or perhaps:
In 1915, a promising Australian sprinter renounces athletic glory by enlisting in the Great War, and must survive the carnage of the doomed Gallipoli campaign in Turkey.
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New version: A mute street performer, abandoned by his troupe at the outbreak of WW2, must overcome his PTSD when he joins a traveling branch of the Resistance to put an end to the Nazi war crimes.
New version:
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New Logline: Inflicted with PTSD from a young age, a mute street performer is abandoned by his troupe as France becomes occupied by the Nazi Wehrmacht. Faced with the choice to escape to neutral Switzerland or fight, he joins the French Resistance as a code-breaker and infiltrates the Nazi regime. HRead more
New Logline:
Inflicted with PTSD from a young age, a mute street performer is abandoned by his troupe as France becomes occupied by the Nazi Wehrmacht. Faced with the choice to escape to neutral Switzerland or fight, he joins the French Resistance as a code-breaker and infiltrates the Nazi regime. His tactics shift when he learns what’s happening to the countless civilians going missing.
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