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A man?s wife is murdered while investigating undead shadow people, leading him to delve into the nature of these creatures.
I like the idea but I do have one question. Do I assume that the wife if murdered by the shadow people or is there someone else involved that is also investigating (or protecting) them and trying to prevent the man and his wife from finding out about them? Please don't let my question be leading inRead more
I like the idea but I do have one question. Do I assume that the wife if murdered by the shadow people or is there someone else involved that is also investigating (or protecting) them and trying to prevent the man and his wife from finding out about them? Please don’t let my question be leading in anyway. I saw another way at looking at what your story may be about.
You refer to the shadow people as creatures; is that how you want the viewer to perceive them?
See lessA modern day story of Oscar and his loser friends, who stand between him and the woman of his dreams.
I concur with the comment above regarding why are his friends standing in the way of their relationship. I have to assume Oscar is "normal", which could be translated as him being an introvert. You might want to identify a characteristic about Oscar which could pose as a challenge or work to his advRead more
I concur with the comment above regarding why are his friends standing in the way of their relationship. I have to assume Oscar is “normal”, which could be translated as him being an introvert. You might want to identify a characteristic about Oscar which could pose as a challenge or work to his advantage to get the girl – if that is the result.
See lessAn ancient vampire re-awakens on a remote Irish island. An addicted American doctor must struggle with his own demons before confronting this evil.
What is the addition of the doctor? Vampires? What is the relevance of the location? Why must the doctor confront the vampire versus anyone else? Are his demons and addiction related? Seems like you could combine the two statements if I understand what your concept is about. For example, "An AmericaRead more
What is the addition of the doctor? Vampires?
What is the relevance of the location?
Why must the doctor confront the vampire versus anyone else?
Are his demons and addiction related?
Seems like you could combine the two statements if I understand what your concept is about. For example, “An American doctor struggling with an addition must overcome his demons to deal with an reawaken vampire.”
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