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  1. Posted: December 31, 2012In: Public

    China uses sunlight to stay in totalitarian power, but when a naive scientist discovers how to usurp their control, she's targeted by every national power there is.

    bryson
    Added an answer on December 31, 2012 at 4:48 pm

    I like this logline. I don't think I can give you any constructive feedback for improvement. Good job in my opinion.

    I like this logline. I don’t think I can give you any constructive feedback for improvement. Good job in my opinion.

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  2. Posted: December 30, 2012In: Public

    When an overworked data analyst mistakenly drives down an infinitely repeating highway, he and his mates must break the loop and get to Vegas.

    bryson
    Added an answer on December 30, 2012 at 5:46 pm

    I like the concept of an infinite highway. So many possibilities and intrigues me. Why must the analyst and his mates get to Vegas? I assume they are all overworked and looking for stress release. How do they get on the highway? Trying to take a shortcut? One approach: On a relaxing retreat to Las VRead more

    I like the concept of an infinite highway. So many possibilities and intrigues me.

    Why must the analyst and his mates get to Vegas? I assume they are all overworked and looking for stress release.
    How do they get on the highway? Trying to take a shortcut?

    One approach: On a relaxing retreat to Las Vegas, a data analyst and his friends take a wrong turn putting them on an infinitely repeating highway.

    Definitely would be in line to watch this movie.

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  3. Posted: December 30, 2012In: Public

    Charlie, a translator, finds his wife has been murdered and turned into an undead shadow creature. He must interpret her speech and discover the mystery behind her death.

    bryson
    Added an answer on December 30, 2012 at 11:59 am

    I like the clarity you added to your revision. Your translator (speech?) now becomes an investigator. I am intrigued as to how interpreting her speech will help solve her murder. In regards to the death, is her transformation comparable to what one would expect when someone becomes a zombie after dyRead more

    I like the clarity you added to your revision. Your translator (speech?) now becomes an investigator. I am intrigued as to how interpreting her speech will help solve her murder.

    In regards to the death, is her transformation comparable to what one would expect when someone becomes a zombie after dying?
    Is there any reason to characterize the shadow creatures as undead?

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