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  1. Posted: June 11, 2015In: Public

    As he chronicles one tenacious man’s fight to survive after a nuclear holocaust decimates life on Earth, a dedicated and determined alien observer must decide whether to obey or defy orders to terminate humanity.

    Byron
    Added an answer on June 13, 2015 at 3:27 am

    I like your thought process, I have been playing with the idea that they do in fact convince them to leave...after cleaning up the earth, or better yet they convince them to leave and let man figure out how to come back out of the chaos or even deposit on a habitable planet before they leave...haveRead more

    I like your thought process, I have been playing with the idea that they do in fact convince them to leave…after cleaning up the earth, or better yet they convince them to leave and let man figure out how to come back out of the chaos or even deposit on a habitable planet before they leave…have to toy with this.

    So does the logline below capture what I am conveying?

    An unwitting participant in an alien experiment must vanquish the ghosts of his past in order to save the woman he loves from a ruthless gang leader.

    A story would be the man struggling with his fear of guns (accidentally killed brother while hunting) in a world where violence in now common. Saving the woman he has come to love.

    B Story, follows the aliens, desire to terminating the experiment and going home.

    Story’s converge when man challenges them what gives right to terminate the experiment and convinces to let man live on his on and evolve as you suggested.

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  2. Posted: June 11, 2015In: Public

    As he chronicles one tenacious man’s fight to survive after a nuclear holocaust decimates life on Earth, a dedicated and determined alien observer must decide whether to obey or defy orders to terminate humanity.

    Byron
    Added an answer on June 13, 2015 at 2:09 am

    For some reason can't reply to you recent post. The motivation of the aliens is: they are longing for beings that can join them as equals. Think of them as shepherds/farmers maybe - they won't "give" a race technology unless they attained a benchmark that the "Master" has set for the experiments. BaRead more

    For some reason can’t reply to you recent post. The motivation of the aliens is: they are longing for beings that can join them as equals. Think of them as shepherds/farmers maybe – they won’t “give” a race technology unless they attained a benchmark that the “Master” has set for the experiments.

    Backstory, they have “reset” earth numerous times over the millennia…dinosaurs ruined their plan, ice age killed off another attempt, etc…they had hopes for this iteration as demonstrated by the good things: music, art, etc; however, man’s aggressive side resulted in wars and finally annihilation of the planet. The aliens know they are close and the anthropologist wants to reset; however, the militant wants to go home! It’s been 100,000 years after all (they are that old).

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  3. Posted: June 11, 2015In: Public

    As he chronicles one tenacious man’s fight to survive after a nuclear holocaust decimates life on Earth, a dedicated and determined alien observer must decide whether to obey or defy orders to terminate humanity.

    Byron
    Added an answer on June 13, 2015 at 12:27 am

    Experiment is coming to a halt because man has destroyed his world; they either have to terminate or reset humanity. Lots to play on there in the book - the man is only one of many potential to reseed earth based on his actions.

    Experiment is coming to a halt because man has destroyed his world; they either have to terminate or reset humanity. Lots to play on there in the book – the man is only one of many potential to reseed earth based on his actions.

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