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  1. Posted: June 11, 2015In: Public

    Being shot in the head is different for one young woman who lives in the moment, since instead of dying, she receives the responsibility of keeping heaven and hell from falling apart, or else an evil far worse than anyone can imagine will destroy everything and everyone.

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    Added an answer on June 12, 2015 at 12:15 am

    I am still learning all the nuances of loglines myself, but I am sure this can be tightened. Wouldn't something like this say it also?: After dying, a simple woman must prevent all out war between heaven and hell or see the destruction of everything she once knew. Who: A simple woman who happens toRead more

    I am still learning all the nuances of loglines myself, but I am sure this can be tightened. Wouldn’t something like this say it also?:

    After dying, a simple woman must prevent all out war between heaven and hell or see the destruction of everything she once knew.

    Who:
    A simple woman who happens to be dead.

    Want:
    Prevent the destruction of want she once knew.

    Obstacle:
    A brewing war between heaven and hell.

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  2. Posted: June 11, 2015In: Public

    An out-world war destines a bio-molecular energy, ineffectual in fusion with any previous life form to Planet Earth, where a benevolent and jubilant father-to-be unwittingly absorbs it and must engage in battle with the implacable beings pursuing the power source for galactic dominion.

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    Added an answer on June 12, 2015 at 12:01 am

    I have read this a number of times and must say I am no closer to the idea. Richiev hit is spot on.

    I have read this a number of times and must say I am no closer to the idea. Richiev hit is spot on.

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  3. Posted: June 11, 2015In: Public

    As he chronicles one tenacious man’s fight to survive after a nuclear holocaust decimates life on Earth, a dedicated and determined alien observer must decide whether to obey or defy orders to terminate humanity.

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    Added an answer on June 11, 2015 at 11:30 pm

    I modified you thoughts, yet as I slept on it and drove into work I realized it missed much of what the story is about. My protagonist is a survivor, yet has been alone since the bombs fell. He meets and falls in love with a young woman who is captured by a warlord. He must save her. In the backgrouRead more

    I modified you thoughts, yet as I slept on it and drove into work I realized it missed much of what the story is about. My protagonist is a survivor, yet has been alone since the bombs fell. He meets and falls in love with a young woman who is captured by a warlord. He must save her. In the background the alien experiment is coming to an end and he has been selected as a possible success candidate. So I took an attempt to make it say “What is it about?”

    Who:
    Shy, frightened young man

    Want:
    To rescue his girlfriend, and prove he is the result the aliens have been looking for.

    Obstacle:
    The ruthless warlord and the experiment coming to an end.

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