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  1. Posted: June 11, 2015In: Public

    As he chronicles one tenacious man’s fight to survive after a nuclear holocaust decimates life on Earth, a dedicated and determined alien observer must decide whether to obey or defy orders to terminate humanity.

    Byron
    Added an answer on June 13, 2015 at 12:17 am

    Alright, I think I may have nailed what I am trying to convey in a short, concise sentence: An unwitting participant in an alien experiment must vanquish the ghosts of his past in order to save the woman he loves from a ruthless gang leader.

    Alright, I think I may have nailed what I am trying to convey in a short, concise sentence:

    An unwitting participant in an alien experiment must vanquish the ghosts of his past in order to save the woman he loves from a ruthless gang leader.

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  2. Posted: June 11, 2015In: Public

    As he chronicles one tenacious man’s fight to survive after a nuclear holocaust decimates life on Earth, a dedicated and determined alien observer must decide whether to obey or defy orders to terminate humanity.

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    Added an answer on June 12, 2015 at 11:21 am

    There are two threads, one is the experiment which is covert, the other is the man with the troubled past (he killed his brother in a hunting accident). He becomes the focal point of the experiment as it winds to an end. Can he rise above his past, who society has shaped him to be and against all odRead more

    There are two threads, one is the experiment which is covert, the other is the man with the troubled past (he killed his brother in a hunting accident). He becomes the focal point of the experiment as it winds to an end. Can he rise above his past, who society has shaped him to be and against all odds save the woman he has come to love.

    Background: It is 150 days after the world as we know it ends, and he has been forced out of the fallout shelter he had made his home due to lack of food. He saved the woman in question from the bad guys, and as they spends their days together he has come to love her. When she is captured, he must save her.

    The aliens have two factions: anthropologists and militant. The experiment was growing humanity and over the 100000 years they have reset the population of earth numbers times trying to get the results they want. The militant faction is set on ending the experiment since man is bent of self-destruction.

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  3. Posted: June 11, 2015In: Public

    As he chronicles one tenacious man’s fight to survive after a nuclear holocaust decimates life on Earth, a dedicated and determined alien observer must decide whether to obey or defy orders to terminate humanity.

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    Added an answer on June 12, 2015 at 10:43 am

    I think what I posted was unclear; that was the old logline (I have fixed the post)...the new one was at the top. You make good points though which I am pondering. This might be better, but leaves out much of the story: "When the woman he loves is captured by a psychotic gang leader, a distressed maRead more

    I think what I posted was unclear; that was the old logline (I have fixed the post)…the new one was at the top.

    You make good points though which I am pondering.

    This might be better, but leaves out much of the story:

    “When the woman he loves is captured by a psychotic gang leader, a distressed man must overcome his troubled past if he hopes to save her.”

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