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  1. Posted: July 7, 2015In: Public

    An IDF Lieutenant has terrible visions of the world’s destruction relating to the arrival of a man claiming to be the Messiah through unexplained miracles.

    Caleb Tumanako Logliner
    Added an answer on July 7, 2015 at 4:43 pm

    The King is the antichrist, the Man of God is from the Papacy and is The False prophet. The IDF soldier realizes this as the King of Israel ends up united going to war against every nation and overcoming them with a great military. The year is 2063. It's heavily inspired by Kojima's Metal Gear SolidRead more

    The King is the antichrist, the Man of God is from the Papacy and is The False prophet. The IDF soldier realizes this as the King of Israel ends up united going to war against every nation and overcoming them with a great military. The year is 2063. It’s heavily inspired by Kojima’s Metal Gear Solid series, just done through film and including biblical prophecy. The IDF soldier ends up assassinating the King of Israel, at which point Satan injabits the corpse of the King and is left blind in his right eye from an IED. His right arm is also damaged extensively during the blast, but with Satan now in charge and in the flesh which God allows, Satan manipulates the whole world into thinking he is god and that everyone should worship him since he has come back from the ded.

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  2. Posted: June 30, 2015In: Public

    When a 17 year-old does a work for the dole program at a Sydney Car Wash for a businessman, he becomes entangled into his shady world while his dreams of wrestling at the 2000 Olympic Games becomes more and more distant by the year. Note: This is a TV pilot.

    Caleb Tumanako Logliner
    Added an answer on July 2, 2015 at 11:10 am

    His goal is to one day wrestle at the Olympic Games but I'm wondering what scene should come first, him at Centrelink - trying to find a job or chasing his dream so there's two goals. I don't know if they are specific or not. Do you have any suggestions?

    His goal is to one day wrestle at the Olympic Games but I’m wondering what scene should come first, him at Centrelink – trying to find a job or chasing his dream so there’s two goals. I don’t know if they are specific or not. Do you have any suggestions?

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  3. Posted: June 30, 2015In: Public

    When a 17 year-old does a work for the dole program at a Sydney Car Wash for a businessman, he becomes entangled into his shady world while his dreams of wrestling at the 2000 Olympic Games becomes more and more distant by the year. Note: This is a TV pilot.

    Caleb Tumanako Logliner
    Added an answer on July 2, 2015 at 10:20 am

    The first episode centres around him working at the car wash. A rich customer comes through, is very rude where we see the seventeen year-old show an aggressive side without actually touching the person which impresses the boss. The boss brings him into his office and promptly fires him. After this,Read more

    The first episode centres around him working at the car wash. A rich customer comes through, is very rude where we see the seventeen year-old show an aggressive side without actually touching the person which impresses the boss. The boss brings him into his office and promptly fires him.

    After this, the seventeen year-old continues with his amatuer wrestling/judo training. Until he recieves a call from the boss. The boss says he has another job for him, just to pick up a package. He does so but it’s from the garage of three outlaw biker guys who they are about to rape, the seventeen year-old beats them all up, one goes for his side arm to which the seventeen year-old steals it from and kills. He finds the package (a block of cocaine) and heads back to the boss.

    He is about to beat up the boss until the boss gives him $10,000 straight away, gives a corrupt Police Detective to go to the scene and clean up the mess before the forensic guys come. Deal done. The boss sets him up with his lawyer in the CBD. There, he meets a receptionist.

    The last day of 1995, he heads to Sydney Harbour with her, takes some of the cocaine and watches as fireworks go off while tears run down his cheeks.

    His goal is to try and make it onto the wrestling/judo Olympic squad for the first season.

    The pilot will start in 1995 and finish in 1996 where we kick off the first season.

    I want Ahn Doh because there is something very uncomfortable about a “gangster” who smiles and cracks jokes like he’s your mate. So the story has been thought out to a point (even the ending of the whole series) but I’m wondering if I should go the UK route and only make it a 2 Series type of show beginning with 1997 and ending on 2000.

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