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  1. Posted: May 17, 2013In: Public

    (Comedy) After the death of his wife (Mell),the oldest outlaw in a notorious biker gang decides to convert his bandits into neighborhood watch members, Whilst his enemies raise the price on his head.

    Callum.S Penpusher
    Added an answer on May 19, 2013 at 7:35 am

    I need help with realizing the target audience, Who would watch this >?

    I need help with realizing the target audience, Who would watch this >?

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  2. Posted: May 17, 2013In: Public

    (Comedy) After the death of his wife (Mell),the oldest outlaw in a notorious biker gang decides to convert his bandits into neighborhood watch members, Whilst his enemies raise the price on his head.

    Callum.S Penpusher
    Added an answer on May 19, 2013 at 7:30 am

    Very true, I just wanted to get the idea down as soon as possible so i went for writing a logline on here. Thanks !

    Very true, I just wanted to get the idea down as soon as possible so i went for writing a logline on here. Thanks !

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  3. Posted: May 17, 2013In: Public

    (Comedy) After the death of his wife (Mell),the oldest outlaw in a notorious biker gang decides to convert his bandits into neighborhood watch members, Whilst his enemies raise the price on his head.

    Callum.S Penpusher
    Added an answer on May 19, 2013 at 6:06 am

    That could actually work ! He has to go back to his old ways to stop the rival gang but also keep a good reputation with the Community. Keeping in mind they are all fairly old ! 1. Wife dies, reunites his biker gang 2.Brainstorm about neighborhood watch team, At first the gang aren't up for it untilRead more

    That could actually work ! He has to go back to his old ways to stop the rival gang but also keep a good reputation with the Community. Keeping in mind they are all fairly old !
    1. Wife dies, reunites his biker gang
    2.Brainstorm about neighborhood watch team, At first the gang aren’t up for it until he convinces them. make name, logo, make clothes.
    3.Get their old bikes out that they haven’t seen for years
    4.Start patrolling the streets fighting crime (Saving the odd cat) Trying to change the way the community view them
    5.But then his old rivals hear the news, reunite their gang to harass the community
    6.The team aren’t having any of it, could possibly end up making things worse by fighting them off.
    7. Community don’t want them to carry on as the neighborhood watch team due to rivalry
    8.Remembers his wife’s dream, a couple days later he plans to get the community behind him again

    The end is the bit i still need to develop, in some way they have to defeat the rival gang and reclaim their place as Mel’s Angels ! Earn the respect of the community.

    barring in mind this is a comedy and they are all quite old ! So ill have to work on the comical aspects aswell

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