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  1. Posted: May 17, 2013In: Public

    (Comedy) After the death of his wife (Mell),the oldest outlaw in a notorious biker gang decides to convert his bandits into neighborhood watch members, Whilst his enemies raise the price on his head.

    Callum.S Penpusher
    Added an answer on May 18, 2013 at 6:23 am

    Successful comedy's always highlight funny things by contratsing them with sad things or a dilemma. Throughout the Hangover its not all rainbows and unicorns, they are in a major dilemma that jeopardizes their relationships and life's all together, its funny because this contrasts with funny momentsRead more

    Successful comedy’s always highlight funny things by contratsing them with sad things or a dilemma. Throughout the Hangover its not all rainbows and unicorns, they are in a major dilemma that jeopardizes their relationships and life’s all together, its funny because this contrasts with funny moments.

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  2. Posted: May 17, 2013In: Public

    (Comedy) After the death of his wife (Mell),the oldest outlaw in a notorious biker gang decides to convert his bandits into neighborhood watch members, Whilst his enemies raise the price on his head.

    Callum.S Penpusher
    Added an answer on May 18, 2013 at 6:20 am

    Then again you are the audience so i think ill follow that through if that works better

    Then again you are the audience so i think ill follow that through if that works better

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  3. Posted: May 17, 2013In: Public

    (Comedy) After the death of his wife (Mell),the oldest outlaw in a notorious biker gang decides to convert his bandits into neighborhood watch members, Whilst his enemies raise the price on his head.

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    Added an answer on May 18, 2013 at 6:18 am

    As much as i do think that would work i wanted to contrast the death to highlight the comical side of the story. For example the film ''Ladykillers'' basically ends in half the characters dying, But i do see how the death could compromise the comedy. I just thought that it would be funny to start thRead more

    As much as i do think that would work i wanted to contrast the death to highlight the comical side of the story. For example the film ”Ladykillers” basically ends in half the characters dying, But i do see how the death could compromise the comedy. I just thought that it would be funny to start the film with a church full of bikers, some even crying over the death, cramped next to ordinary citizens. Then the comical aspects come out when they try to become good. But maybe it would be better for this old tough biker to fall in love and be influenced to change his ways

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