Ok thanks ill defiantly take this on board, i’m 16 and quite new to this so still have a long way to go. I’m studying English Literature and Language for A level as well, and have high hopes to be able to make some short films in a couple of years. Here’s a more precise description of the story – ”Mel’s Angels is a comedy about an ageing biker, who after his wife dies, reunites his old biker gang to form Mel’s dream neighborhood watch alliance. This becomes increasingly difficult when his old enemies decide to reunite their gang and cause havoc in the community.” The bikers Goal is to be rid of his guilt for not following through with his Wife’s dream, but also to turn a new leaf in life by helping the community. Some conflicts are the fact that he has a bad reputation with the community, and his old enemies want to make his new purpose in the community a living hell. The comedy comes out because they are all getting old (Not really old) but fairly old. Also the fact that their enemies are hardly a threat anymore due to their age but still think they can cause Havoc. Still a lot more development to be done but it’s getting there. Thanks for the comment, appreciate it !