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Richiev gave me an idea... "When his daughter contracts cancer, a desperate teacher kidnaps her rich student only to discover he knows her and chooses to cooperate instead" reason: he is fed up of his parent's *detrimental ways of spending their money.....he saw a better use *saving a life is certaiRead more
Richiev gave me an idea…
“When his daughter contracts cancer, a desperate teacher kidnaps her rich student only to discover he knows her and chooses to cooperate instead”
reason: he is fed up of his parent’s *detrimental ways of spending their money…..he saw a better use
*saving a life is certainly better than throwing expensive wine parties
A conflict could arise when his parents decide not to pay instead ______________
possibly end into his parents realising their error and with their generous donation, the successful treatment of her daughter
everybody’s happy
See lesspotential dark thriller “the see saw”
"A by the book undercover agent must team up with his mafia informant to prove his innocence after being framed by his former mentor and put the responsible party behind the bars" thanks Richiev for adjective "by the book" and for pointing out his goal more clearly thanks Foxtrot25, even i don't likRead more
“A by the book undercover agent must team up with his mafia informant to prove his innocence after being framed by his former mentor and put the responsible party behind the bars”
thanks Richiev for adjective “by the book” and for pointing out his goal more clearly
thanks Foxtrot25, even i don’t like the title myself (what was I thinking??) can somebody also suggest a title
finally thanks to CraigDGriffiths for your second suggestion, I chose your answer because your second suggestion seems to fit
thanks again everyone for such insightful responses
I love logline.it
See lessA young girl possessed by a Demon, writes an epic in which she demonstrates the Demon as her God, Christ, because he is harmless and inspirational.
how is he inspirational goes on the first half what "changes" does he bring in her could become the first half of act II (page 25-55 in a 120 page script) then the "opposing forces" and "their why" to be build upto the second half How does presence of this demon create conflict in the plot which seeRead more
how is he inspirational goes on the first half
what “changes” does he bring in her could become the first half of act II (page 25-55 in a 120 page script)
then the “opposing forces” and “their why” to be build upto the second half
How does presence of this demon create conflict in the plot which seemed to be so far so good?
premise is cool but your logline fails to specify “conflict” and her “goal thus”
when the demon possessed girl does (verb)
See lessshe must do (verb) to achieve (certain goal) or else (stakes)