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  1. Posted: September 28, 2015In: Horror

    When raped near to her children, a beautiful widow turns the tables on her attacker revealing she is an ancient harpy raising her young.

    variable Uberwriter
    Added an answer on December 29, 2017 at 3:16 am

    it still doesn't have much road to go, for a film ...while it sounds like a cool concept to be written as a book, godspeed Jean-Marie Mazaleyrat

    it still doesn’t have much road to go, for a film
    …while it sounds like a cool concept to be written as a book,
    godspeed Jean-Marie Mazaleyrat

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  2. Posted: June 12, 2017In: Superhero

    When a young girl with special brain abilities finally escapes her prison, she?s seen as a weapon of mass destruction by both sides of a rebellion ? but she?s just searching for peace.

    variable Uberwriter
    Added an answer on December 29, 2017 at 2:47 am

    "a young renegade prisoner with unusual mental powers tries to live a normal life, only to find herself at the center of a rebellion with both the sides seeking to use her as weapon of mass destruction"

    “a young renegade prisoner with unusual mental powers tries to live a normal life,
    only to find herself at the center of a rebellion
    with both the sides seeking to use her as weapon of mass destruction”

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  3. Posted: December 14, 2017In: Fantasy

    When a new drug augmenting reality hits the market, a young lawyer stifled by his career takes the drug and stumbles upon a door to a different plane of existence, where he encounters a young woman who will stop at nothing to defend her village against the specter of a demon.

    variable Uberwriter
    Added an answer on December 29, 2017 at 1:57 am

    I agree with dPG here in... "His personal stake in the action may be that joining the fight is his only way of getting back home" although that should only be his initial take on the situation then later on-as the story develops into more urgency-the plot must become personal to him, (that is) he muRead more

    I agree with dPG here in…
    “His personal stake in the action may be that joining the fight is his only way of getting back home”
    although that should only be his initial take on the situation
    then later on-as the story develops into more urgency-the plot must become personal to him, (that is) he must help the girl because he hasaid now fallen for her inspired by her leadership
    all the while the girl thinks he is helping her for the selfish reasons of returning back
    But he proves his love for her by (then) not returning when the opportunity presents itself
    (The portal opens up or something)
    the entire buildup of “how important it is for him to return” can be used entirely in proving his love “when he decides not to go”
    THAT! finally convinced the girl.

    Also Richiev’s take is cool..

    maybe her family was abducted too..
    ..so that you can give her a tragic history providing her with enough vengeance to act as the village leader

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