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  1. Posted: September 7, 2012In: Public

    Cop by day/wolf by full moon. When werewolf police detective Joshua Hobbel is framed for murder, he must accept the beast within in order to stop the human monsters that surround him.

    ChasFisher
    Added an answer on September 7, 2012 at 11:05 am

    How about this: Cop by day/wolf by full moon. When a cursed detective is framed for murder, he must accept the beast within in order to stop the human monsters that surround him. I hear you about "human monsters" being vague, but really the primary antagonist is his curse. And what I want to show inRead more

    How about this:

    Cop by day/wolf by full moon. When a cursed detective is framed for murder, he must accept the beast within in order to stop the human monsters that surround him.

    I hear you about “human monsters” being vague, but really the primary antagonist is his curse. And what I want to show in the film is that humanity can be so much worse than the monster we invent.

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  2. Posted: September 7, 2012In: Public

    A King of Gangland vigilante takes on a tough young recruit but the AWOL commando desires his mentor's bloody crown.

    ChasFisher
    Added an answer on September 7, 2012 at 10:48 am

    King of Gnagland vigilante seems like two very different archtypes. If you are a crime boss, you of course operate outside the law (thus a tautology). What makes him a vigilante? But at least with this logline (in contrast to the other two) you have got the central conflict that will drive the filmRead more

    King of Gnagland vigilante seems like two very different archtypes. If you are a crime boss, you of course operate outside the law (thus a tautology). What makes him a vigilante? But at least with this logline (in contrast to the other two) you have got the central conflict that will drive the film clearly outlined.

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  3. Posted: September 7, 2012In: Public

    Years after his young son's unsolved murder a tiring vigilante takes on a new recruit and discovers the truth about his son…

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    Added an answer on September 7, 2012 at 10:45 am

    This logline is WAY stronger than the other and - I assume - is for the same story?

    This logline is WAY stronger than the other and – I assume – is for the same story?

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