1. Posted: September 7, 2012In:

    An obsessed, violent vigilante tries to protect the world but tears his family apart…

    ChasFisher

    What is the antagonist? What is his goal (protecting the world being a bit vague)/

    What is the antagonist? What is his goal (protecting the world being a bit vague)/

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  2. Posted: September 7, 2012In:

    Cop by day/wolf by full moon. When werewolf police detective Joshua Hobbel is framed for murder, he must accept the beast within in order to stop the human monsters that surround him.

    ChasFisher

    Thanks Nicholas. How about this: As a cursed detective struggles to contain the wolf within, he suspects he is being framed for murder. To uncover the true killer, he must either accept the beast or be lost to his curse forever.

    Thanks Nicholas.

    How about this:

    As a cursed detective struggles to contain the wolf within, he suspects he is being framed for murder. To uncover the true killer, he must either accept the beast or be lost to his curse forever.

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  3. Posted: September 7, 2012In:

    Cop by day/wolf by full moon. When werewolf police detective Joshua Hobbel is framed for murder, he must accept the beast within in order to stop the human monsters that surround him.

    ChasFisher

    Appreciate your thoughts dude but the script is written already! Just trying to hone the logline. And you will be pleased to know he isn't framed for his partner's murder. He actually kills his own partner when the killer steals the silver chains he ties himself up with at full moon. :)

    Appreciate your thoughts dude but the script is written already! Just trying to hone the logline. And you will be pleased to know he isn’t framed for his partner’s murder. He actually kills his own partner when the killer steals the silver chains he ties himself up with at full moon. 🙂

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