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As a cursed detective struggles to contain the wolf within, he suspects he is being framed for murder. With the true killer desperate to expose the existence of werewolves, the detective must accept the beast within… or be lost to the wolf forever.
How about this Andrew: As a cursed detective is framed by a killer determined to expose the existence of werewolves, he must accept the beast within or be lost to it forever.
How about this Andrew:
As a cursed detective is framed by a killer determined to expose the existence of werewolves, he must accept the beast within or be lost to it forever.
See lessAs a cursed detective struggles to contain the wolf within, he suspects he is being framed for murder. With the true killer desperate to expose the existence of werewolves, the detective must accept the beast within… or be lost to the wolf forever.
Thanks. Works as a logline?
Thanks. Works as a logline?
See lessOn a dare a naive orphan tries to get aboard a legendary space ship, getting past an over zealous security guard, and back to the orphanage before dinner.
I really like this logline. Feels like Zathura or The Goonies or even a scifi Slumdog Millionaire. Great work. However, I would consider deleting or replacing "getting past an over zealous security guard". The logline would be cleaner and let the reader's imagination run riot. While the security guaRead more
I really like this logline. Feels like Zathura or The Goonies or even a scifi Slumdog Millionaire. Great work.
However, I would consider deleting or replacing “getting past an over zealous security guard”. The logline would be cleaner and let the reader’s imagination run riot.
While the security guard (and can you be over zealous when you are guarding a legendary space ship) is clearly the main obstacle and antagonist, it just raises the question “Why does a legendary space ship only have 1 security guard?” If you imagine the logline for HUGO, do you think it would mention Sacha Baron Cohen’s character? Maybe, but I doubt it.
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