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A blood spatter analyst by day / serial killer by night longs to share his dark secret, but can't for fear of losing those he loves…
Well, it may be about that to you, but I don't know if "A Serial killer fears being truly known," is going to get a studio exec to write a big check. Just IMHO.
Well, it may be about that to you, but I don’t know if “A Serial killer fears being truly known,” is going to get a studio exec to write a big check. Just IMHO.
See lessA blood spatter analyst by day / serial killer by night longs to share his dark secret, but can't for fear of losing those he loves…
I kind of feel like the pizzazz and the hook of the premise has been "drained out" of this logline. I'd favor something like, "A serial killer with a conscience in the form of his dead father culls his victims from the most wanted list of the Miami Police Department where he works."
I kind of feel like the pizzazz and the hook of the premise has been “drained out” of this logline. I’d favor something like, “A serial killer with a conscience in the form of his dead father culls his victims from the most wanted list of the Miami Police Department where he works.”
See lessWhen a socially inept nerdy teen falls for the newest cool girl in town, he must battle her 7 evil exes before he can date her.
7 evil exes, not ex-boyfriends. One is a girl ; )
7 evil exes, not ex-boyfriends. One is a girl ; )
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