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  1. Posted: August 26, 2012In: Examples

    A futuristic, oppressive & decadent state demands teenagers for their blood sport. Making a resourceful girl take her little sister’s spot to kill to survive ‘the hunger games’.

    CraigBerger
    Added an answer on August 31, 2012 at 11:23 pm

    How about "In a dystopian future, a rebellious teenage huntress from a poverty stricken district must compete in a gladiatorial contest against trained killers in order to save her sister's life."

    How about “In a dystopian future, a rebellious teenage huntress from a poverty stricken district must compete in a gladiatorial contest against trained killers in order to save her sister’s life.”

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  2. Posted: August 30, 2012

    When an aquaphobic janitor discovers he has the ability to control water, he must overcome his fear to save his fiance from a fire manipulating madman

    CraigBerger
    Added an answer on August 31, 2012 at 11:17 pm

    I'm agreeing with Heather. I'm not sure producers are imaginative enough to understand what you mean by "control water." Maybe you should say something specific about what he can do with water. Also, your title "Horn of the Leviathan" doesn't seem to give us any hints as to what the script is about,Read more

    I’m agreeing with Heather. I’m not sure producers are imaginative enough to understand what you mean by “control water.” Maybe you should say something specific about what he can do with water. Also, your title “Horn of the Leviathan” doesn’t seem to give us any hints as to what the script is about, which you might want to consider.

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  3. Posted: August 30, 2012

    A smart, new classy version of an old west historical tale that has never been told, between a well-dressed clean man of small stature and his dirty giant brutal enemy with a personal vendetta;of which takes place in a large alluring and immaculately clean gambling hall and infamous brothel, where heaven and hell plays about.

    CraigBerger
    Added an answer on August 30, 2012 at 12:44 pm

    The idea seems interesting, I just feel you need to boil it down so an agent, producer or manager can take one look and instantly understand what the movie is about.

    The idea seems interesting, I just feel you need to boil it down so an agent, producer or manager can take one look and instantly understand what the movie is about.

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